One thing I would change about my book I am reading is that I would have less characters and simpler names for all the characters. It gets hard to remember who the people are throughout the different lives, and I sometimes find myself having to go back a few pages to see who that certain character is.
SUMMARY: I'm going to tell you about the life they were just in together. It took place in Paris and the year is 1937. The girl is named Delilah, and she is a singer at a major club called Club Panther. The club got that name by her pet panther that she has trained. Bert is a newspaper writer and wanted to interview her, since she had great talent. They ended up falling in love with each other, and they always found themselves with each other. Lenny, the club's owner, got very jealous of their affection for eachother. Lenny set Bert up with this girl named Yvette. Bert thought he was meeting Delilah, but really it was Yvette waiting for him. Lenny's plan didn't work, Delilah never got jealous. At the end of this chapter Bert gets shot by a German agent.
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